Friday, October 10, 2008

things i would change in my book

I would change what the officers did about the death threats.I would change this aspect because, if they would have investagated the house for plans or stuff like that to kill somone they would havw found the guns and bombs.Eric harris was not old enough to own a gun.LOet alone a whole arsonal.If they would have serched the house they would have found all that stuff and probably some incriminating evidence of Dylan Klebold.Then they would have had been out in prison for alot of reasons....................................The massacure would have never happened

2 comments:

misz.jaszy said...

Wow....That Was A Really Good idea To Chanqe That...Sounds Like A Scary Time!!!!1
lolsz

J. Pingrey said...

Obviously it's hard to think about what you would have changed in a non-fiction book, but you give a good idea of how the actions of people involved could have different consequences. Good job!